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Entelechy  - a vital agent or force directing growth and life.

In the philosophy of Aristotle, the condition of a thing whose essence is fully realized; actuality

Pierre Teilhard de Chardin explained, "It is inside of you, like the butterfly is inside of the caterpillar. It means the dynamic purpose that is coded in you..."








And so, ENTELEKY...

The Pitch:

When global tweens, Sage, Mei, Gabe and Themba are snatched by advanced underwater beings they discover humanity has taken an evolutionary leap. And they’re it. Now they’ll have to use their next-generation abilities to escape.
 


The short version:

An MG contemporary fantasy told in the distinct voices of four multicultural characters.


Children are being stolen but Sage, Mei, Gabe and Themba haven’t been, yet. They’re four global tweens recruited by the Enlerians, advanced ocean-dwelling beings, because they have powers coded within them - powers that can save the children.

The Korastians, another underwater civilization, have decided that humanity is hopeless and are stealing children in their bid to control the earth. Now these four kids are tasked with getting themselves kidnapped in order to infiltrate the domed world of Korast, save the children being reprogrammed there, and stop the eradication of adults above.

To succeed they will have to believe the Enlerians and dive in, accepting what they are truly capable of. Fighting advanced mental and technological weapons, it will take all their new found powers to save themselves, let alone humanity.


The long version:

An upper middle grade contemporary adventure fantasy...

Told in the distinct voices of...

4 tweens:

Sage: struggles to control her own emotions and takes on those of the people around her so losing her home to bankruptcy is sending her into a deep plunge

Mei: has been sent to live with her grandparents after her mother's death because she hasn't lived up to her father's expectations

Gabe: his incredible physical abilities can't save him when his father drives them off a bridge

Themba: seeing the endless possibilities of each moment helps him escape the mine collapse but not the nightmares after

Each one is trying to stay afloat in their own corners of the world when....

The Enlerians, an advanced race of ocean-dwelling beings that shape-shift, communicate telepathically and understand the possibilities of the science of energy (it’s unlimited and can give us powers beyond belief), seek their help.

They know the four represent the next human evolutionary step, Homo Universalis and therefore have next-generation human abilities that will save humanity so they whisk them away to...

Enleria, a futuristic, fantastical underwater world where the four are trained to use energy the way their bodies were designed to and discover how to use their abilities so they can infiltrate....

Korast, another domed world deep in the depths of the sea, where the Korastians are reprogramming stolen human children because they have decided humanity is hopeless and must be controlled. Where Sage, Mei, Gabe and Themba will have to... 

Dive in and accept what they are truly capable of because it will take all their new found powers to...

Fight advanced mental and technological weapons and save themselves, let alone humanity.




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